When asked "What is the common
outlook on slavery?" it is easy to say, "Slavery is commonly viewed
as a terrible institution", but wouldn't it be more interesting to write
an essay arguing that slavery is a necessary evil that will never completely go
away as we are all slaves to our environment? This is not the
"normal" argument, and by opening your essay with a thesis that
strong, you already have a jump start on everyone else as your idea is original
and creative.
Now by saying think outside the box, I am not suggesting
to go wild and make up an argument that in no way applies to the question
asked. What I am saying, is that to write an original and interesting essay it
is helpful to consider all possible characteristics of a topic and then pick
the one that is most interesting to you.
The idea of thinking outside the box
can be useful in many scenarios. One situation is when developing a thesis or
argument for an essay. In class this year, my classmates and I were given an in
class timed essay and asked to read a short excerpt, Staying Put: Making a
Home in a Restless World by Scott Russell Sanders. As suggested by the
title the excerpt was about migration and how individuals constantly migrate to
"start over", destroying the world and the environment in the
process. We were told to write an essay in which we analyze the strategies
Sander's used to develop his perspective about moving. A generic response could
have been "Sander's believes moving is bad", however by thinking more
in depth about the effects of moving and the points Sander's brought up in his essay
I argued, "Sanders believes that moving is the cancer of beneficial
development." By proving this more interesting and developed argument I
was able to attain a 9 or 100% on the essay, which is due in part to my ability
to think outside the box and fully understand the characteristics of the topic
presented to me.
Another situation in which thinking
outside the box is useful includes analyzing and determining the purpose of
rhetorical devices. In the same essay discussed above, I analyzed the
alliteration of the letter V when Sanders says, "But migrants often pack
up their visions and values with the rest of their baggage and
carry them along." In thinking about these visions and values could
represent I concluded that the repetition of the letter V was an attempt by the
author to sound out the word vanity, therefore suggesting that these
"visions and values are actually vain representations of what the reality
of migration really is. Migrants follow a mere, vain appearance of a better
life only hurting themselves in the process, as migrants
soon discover that this new environment is the same as where they left
from." By thinking outside the box in this situation, I was able to create
more interesting analysis while proving my point at the same time. Thinking
outside the box usually allows "for better insight and understanding"
into a piece of writing, or complex topic, therefore meeting one of the main
requirements necessary to get a 9 on the AP Exam and on in class timed
writings.
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